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“I think we're ready to go. How about you?”
Glen yelled his question in Mark's ear, forced to raise his voice over the loud thumping dance music of the bar.
“Sure. Let's get out of here.”
Glen tapped Marilyn's shoulder to get her attention and motioned with his head that they were leaving. The three of them made their way through the gyrating throng of...
A big elephant in the room
“I think we're ready to go. How about you?”
Glen yelled his question in Mark's ear, forced to raise his voice over the loud thumping dance music of the bar.
“Sure. Let's get out of here.”
Glen tapped Marilyn's shoulder to get her attention and motioned with his head that they were leaving. The three of them made their way through the gyrating throng of...
A big elephant in the room